My Journey

From mind to paper and back again.

Activity 22.5

on February 21, 2009

Part One – 50 words of what the photo depicts.

Two girls on a bus having fun and being teenagers, they are making the peace sign with their hands and are both smiling back at the camera, clearly friends with each other having a laugh.

Word count 35

Part Two – 150 words about what’s going on around the photo

The Stagecoach bus that the two girls, Sarah and Amber are on is just passing the Tesco extra in Droylsden on its way to Ashton, one of their usual hangouts. The picture was taken by Sam, Sarah’s boyfriend who asked them to pose and pull silly faces while he took the picture. The bus is rather empty around the teenagers, there are no other people complaining of their activity while the three are generally having a laugh. Word count 77

Part Three – 250 words combining first two parts

As Amber, Sam and Sarah sat on the bus on the way to Ashton, one of their normal haunts, they decided they were bored. The bus was fairly empty and all three had their mobile phones with them. Sam decided to take a picture of Amber and Sarah, just as the Stagecoach bus passed Tesco in Droylsden. He asked the girls to pull silly faces and pose for the camera. He used his phone to take the photograph of the two girls posing making the peace signs with their hands. The two girls are enjoying themselves, both very good friends having a laugh. Word count 103


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